Bush’s Secretary of Energy, Sam Bodman, is against removing speculators from oil futures; is he correct?

Says that it is purely a supply and demand issue to explain the doubling of prices in a year. By the way, this is from his Bio…
“From there, Secretary Bodman went to Fidelity Venture Associates, a division of the Fidelity Investments. In 1983 he was named President and Chief Operating Officer of Fidelity Investments [...]

Please help me correct the grammar in my autobiography!!!?

hello~I come from TAIWAN. In our culture, we need to write an autobiography in English to get an interview chance. Therefore, I need someone who speak English as native language to correct my grammer and sentence in my paragraph for me. Perhaps there’s many funny words in my writing, but…..I sincerely hope you can [...]